Thankyou for your feedback.
This ammount of text is the bare minimum for an enjoyalbe story with a ballanced fun and teach factor and... Ok this is just my stupid oppinion. :D
Actuallay I know you're right about this... hopefully this is the maximum ammount of text and informations for a gameJam.
I'll be happy if all of the players have enough patiente to start the real game. :)
Thanks again.