I really enjoyed reading through this adventure and I think it's got a really distinct identity apart from the standard "biolab gone to shit" plotline! Love the melancholy Signalis-style buildup. The NPC relationships are well-considered, the horror itself is cool, and the art direction is excellent. I especially want to highlight the map! Its icons could be bigger for my terrible eyes, but it establishes a great sense of geography for exploration and I really value that in modules of this kind! I'm also a fan of the oxygen resource tracking, perfect way to incentivize the PCs to keep things moving and make interesting choices.
I do have some concerns around the formatting - text tends to run into margins and the condensed body font + thinner headers creates some readability issues in some areas. Grey highlights fade important text into the background more than it should - underlining or using red might pop more effectively.
All that said, this is a really cohesive module and a great showing for the jam! Oh - I can't not mention the full EP of ambient tracks! Incredibly impressive extra mile, very immersive and vibey.