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Excellent outing! Most one-shots require FAR less written content than a pamphlet can hold, so it's great to see one that intentionally leans into empty space vs. packing the space to excess. This is a lean and engaging adventure with great focus and a superbly readable style. Big fan of the two-tone colour treatment and the creepy art!

Critically speaking, the line spacing on the text bothers me with how tight it is. I feel there's room to increase it a point or two to keep lines from overlapping. I was also thrown off a bit by the second statline in the "Vampire" section. Is it for a swarm of bats? Wasn't incredibly clear to me. I also wonder if a second weakness might be good to include since "Weaknesses" is its own header with only one entry.

Excellent showing all around. Reminds me to check the rest of your catalog out!

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Hi Joshua!

It's going to be difficult to increase the space between the lines on the front, but I'll look into correcting that on the back, where I have more free space.

The second set of stats is for rats or bats, at the GM's discretion. Whether they are rats or bats then becomes a matter of personal preference, depending on which will induce the most terror in the players.

Oh, I mistakenly pluralized "weakness"! I'll take this opportunity to come up with a second weakness.

Thanks for your feedback!