You have some really fun and clever encounters as some of them give me a real vivid picture. There’s a lot of really fun ideas here and most of my feedback would be what others have already commented so I’ll spare the repeating. My original idea for this jam was to have a watery ghost figure and lean into the supernatural so I’m happy someone took up that idea as it’s a really fun one. Really I think the trifold just needs to dial into its themes and make everything cohesive. From reading it the two main pillars are the conspiracy about earth and the ghost on the ship. Connecting everything to that and expending on it can really make this adventure pop since you already have all the fun and crazy cool encounter ideas. I hope you keep at it as there’s definitely something really creative here if you keep pushing some of the core ideas.