The Vibes here are excellent! I think that some reformatting of the layout and information could really help this to sing! in particular I would swap the panels 2 and 5 (top of each page read Rising Tide, Rules for Escalation and REM-86 “THE DEEP SLEEP”) this would put the section explaining what the PC’s are here for/doing up front so all the other info can be read with that context in mind!
additionally, if you plan on this being a print product I’d certainly add a bit of a margin and bleed.
This is a super cool concept and one I’d love to take my players through, so I hope you do a post Jam version and really bring it to its full potential!