I appreciate the feedback! The polish was definitely not where I would like it, I was super down to the wire on this one. The paper texture background is a great call. I was going to change the employee stat blocks to a table but ran out of time, but I think a little more on their personalities could have been good. I agree that the patient table is a little cramped, I think it could also use some varying backgrounds to break it up some. In terms of the timeline I while I see your point that there could have been a slower buildup I guess I was just going with pushing the tempo, but I can see a more social adventure with the skin suits doing a better job of hiding things and giving some opportunities for some interactions with the doctor could have been good. I did originally have the doctor come out to get worm food or something I just liked the image of him having little holes all over his body and if he came out like that I'd be giving the game away. Something to think about.
Thanks again for the excellent feedback!