This was really cool to read. Biggest points for overall look and vibes and generally just being wildly imaginative. I thought it might be taking a lot from Iron Lung but really it's its own thing. I have two major suggestions: firstly, it could use a bit of proofreading for minor spelling/grammar issues, as well as some fixes to readability (low contrast font/background at times), line spacing, etc. Secondly, it would benefit greatly from a short paragraph condensing the main idea at the beginning of the pamphlet. A lot of things are referenced before they're actually spelled out which makes the reader have to do a bit of mental legwork as they try to understand the adventure. Really cool though, great maps especially!