Hi there, here are some notes I took while reading! Presented in the order I thought em
The presentation here is real nice -- the coffee stains, "doodles" in pencil, adds flavour without detracting from the text.
The writing feels really polished. Like it really feels like you did a couple of rounds of editing - all of the info is here with no flabby extra bits. This is v appreciated!
The acid is a great spoil to get parties with ships licking their lips.
"capture has so far been fruitless" hahahaha very good
All of the xeno(flora|fauna) feels very appropriate for this setting, and sets itself apart from other mothership stuff i have read so far! very hell-in-the-jungle
Any scenario where I can roll a 4 and give my players poop is a winner in my book.
Earthquakes exposing big old centipede legs is the worst, i hate it, excellent work. :)
I haven't delved too deep on ship stuff so I can't really comment on the megafauna's "crunch" but from a "fluff" perspective I really like what you've done with it. nasty and tragic. how dare you make me feel bad for a big bug