I love the artwork here, it really gets a handmade zine vibe! Here is my feedback:
+ Initial D/Ghost Rider in space? Awesome.
+ The text is clear and readable
+ La Laguna seems like an interesting location
+ Mounting pressure and tension are really interesting factors to this
+ The Racing Devil (or...speed demon?) is a great monster and I like how it is used!
- Information given is clear, but the formatting makes it a bit tricky to parse at times; things could be a bit more concise.
- The map system for the race feels a bit clunky. I feel like some refinement for the race mechanics would go a long way.
-The theme feels a bit light overall
- At times feels a bit too railroady