Thank you for the insights! I do plan on cleaning this up, the indents issue was brought to my attention and Ill be fixing that in a later release. The kraken originally had text stating it began assaulting the outside of the ship but it was removed at some point - I see that was an error. I think I will follow on advice and make the encounters more thematic and in line with the ghost. Again, thank you for the review to make this the best it can be!