Really enjoyed reading this, and whilst I think it could benefit from a bit of work on the design and layout, and agree with the timeline feedback below, this is one of my favourites from this jam. The flavour is great.
If you have specific things you'll like to see changed about the layout, I'm all ears. I definitely plan on tweaking things a bit before releasing it as a finished product. All I've got so far is the suggestion to reduce the colour palette a bit, which makes sense.
