Hiya, thanks for your thoughtful comments! I was worried that the timelines might not read well so it's nice to hear you appreciated them. I definitely wish I had given some more love to the characters section (both layout-wise and narrative-wise), that's usually where i start writing stuff like this but this time I worked backwards (and didn't leave myself enough time or space). And re: the yellow -- didn't occur to me at the time but I definitely see what you're talking about! Appreciate you pointing it out.
Working my way through them all in reverse alphabetical order for some reason, so I'm looking forward to reading yours soon!