Oooowwwwww, thank you so much!
I’ve started to develop a bit of a guilty pleasure for reading detailed and positive (lol) feedback :D
And about the MC not staying ignorant: YES! Thank you! Another one of my guilty pleasures is the "Damsel not in Distress" archetype, so you can definitely expect a lot of girl boss moments (in a good way).
After all, SHE is the main character! ;)
I mean - I'll Absolutely give constructive feedback if I feel it warranted (in a respectful way, oc), as a writer/creative myself, since it truly helps, but this first chappie was a 'no notes' for me. There was nothing in it that felt blatantly 'off' or incongruent or oof. Just a solid + fabulous start, like I mentioned. Be PROUD 🎉
And - YASSSS, MC QUEEN~ We love a 'Damsel in DETERMINED'. I'm glad that you don't fall to that trope as it's as tired as it is Overplayed. Can't wait to see all her 'Girl Boss' moments in action (she had a few in ch. 1!!) -- I already knew from playing your earlier works this would be epic; so zero doubt you'll nail this and give us such a great time!
