Wow, thank you for the detailed feedback! I'd just finished reading a book on the basics of Jung before this, but I hadn't actually realised how much of it had seeped into the story!
I've got a build on the way with some spelling/grammar corrections, so I'll pop that one in, thanks for finding it. :)
Which ending(s) did you get?
Post-scriptum: I should love to invite you to the Dream Jam!! Its duration is the month of April, starting tomorrow. Come take a look, in case you haven't yet, and spread the word to fellow surrealists and psychonauts!!!
https://itch.io/jam/dreamjam2020
[({L.J.)}
Sure thing, Amesy!! Just so you know: one of my most talented collaborators would often slide from one project to the next, with stellar results, but different genius is conveyed by different avenues. As writers we must remain in our respective elements. That is why I have given participants one month for this one. You have time to let it stew in the back of your mind. It's a very flexible event. I know that, personally, I find that if I don't follow up one success with another then I fall into a depressive rut. But that's a matter of temperament. Do what feels sane, and listen to your Heart. Looking forward to seeing more great stories come from you.
[({L.J.)}]