Hey cool stuff!
It's weird to me that (almost) everything is playing the same rythm throughout the whole piece. It's a pretty original take but I think it would benefit from some counter rythm between the harmony and the lead. The ending is a bit of a tease on that because I felt like I'd hear the release I was waiting from the start :)
Glad you had a good go of it. Yeah mostly due to time-constraints. This was done in the course of 24 hours (and so-shall #19...)
I'm kind of crushed in ratings by folks that are musicians all-the-time, (and logically, I should be).
Once in a while the top 5% stuff does better. Many of my things are done to secure initial-versions then, eventually, i remaster 18months later (see "alpha remaster" (single or plural) by searching any platform with "stoothoff" appended)
Cheers!
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