My review of the game
Spoilers..........
I finished Lotars route yesterday and I have to say I absolutely love the way you write romance! 💖 that said, the story did jump around a bit, with characters like Penelope and the fey appearing quite suddenly. It felt a bit disjointed at times. Some of the plot twists— the betrayal - and what ultimately became of the Matriarch—were so wild that I couldn’t help but laugh. 🙈 It was chaotic, but entertaining!
The amount of variables made it difficult to ‘glue’ some passages as smoothly as I’d like without creating even longer branches and routes, so I decided to do what I saw in other IFs and 'hard cap' the passages. I am waiting for more feedback atm, so I might go back and adjust some things like the stat lock and so on as needed. I probably won't be having as many ROs and/or LTs in my other games, though, as less content will help me keep things coherent.
