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Not bad :D I find it very interesting. The music at the beginning is very catchy!

I have noticed, like with other Filipino-> English games, the grammar is a bit off, and it can make the game difficult to understand, or interrupt the flow when a player is reading. So I'd like to make the offer of going over the script to correct the small errors, if you like. :) I've done it for some other games, because I hate to see a game be shot down for something so small. So, I would be happy to help, if you accept.

Either way, I look forward to the full release. :)

sorry if i took some time to reply XD
(we've been busy with school works)

thank you for taking the time to play our game and yes! definitely we will take your offer of fixing our grammar :D
i'd like to discuss this further if you will ^_^

Absolutely~ You can email me at:

bellannmae@gmail.com