I have to say that both stories (Sisterly Lust and TFTNV) are very addicting.
I fast forward through most of the sex scenes (pretty repetitive) to get back to the story itself.
As soon as I finished the first one (downloaded from here), I purchased it through GOG to show support for you to continue the story. (I have purchased both SL & TFTNV on GOG, and am hoping that you will also put any and all future of your novels on GOG. Unfortunately, there is no sign of the 2nd part on there, so can't buy it.
I have now finished the second part, but have found an issue with Vess. For the last play-through of the story, the only ones I am having a relationship with are the 3 sisters. Because of this, up until the end, there was no option to release her from detention, and I had no problem with that. She still supported and cooperated with us.
The issue is that somewhere between 19 and 21 (I think it was 20.. apologies, I didn't take notes and just went ahead with the story to the end..), she is all of a sudden out of the cage and having a relationship with me, which should not have happened. It was probably within 15 minutes of the error that it seems everyone is getting (not sure it is the same error, but it is the only one I received through the whole game, so I suspect it is).
Anyway, the only complaint I have, is that there are too many big butts, lol. I know that is a "thing" for some people, but I am not one of them. (would be nice if it was possible to choose body prefs at the beginning of the game)...
Please put the others on GOG too!! I will buy them as soon as they are up. And thank you for your really good games.. I hope you can continue with your creativity.
OH!!! 1 last thing... PLEASE finish up 2 and get started on 3 ASAP! Last thing I saw on part 2 was, "TO BE CONTINUED"... :^(