Well let me ease your worries that i absolutely love writing this VN, and it's my favorite pass time haha <3 I love that you enjoy and get the pacing. I didn't want to write something where it takes 7 hours for anything interesting to happen, so I developed a way that I believe you can feel a lot of emotions... a lot of BELIEVABLE emotions in a short amount of time. Make no mistake, there's tons more character development to be done, and I will be doing plenty of it in build three
As for your comment on the villain, I assure you that they're no pushover hhehehehehhe :)