Finally, somebody combined my two favorite things: Mass Effect and horny furries.
I got the feeling just from the "Warnings" page that I was going to like the writing style here, and the rest of the game did not disappoint. Dialogue is sharp and snappy but never feels unrealistic, and I think the work you've put in to make all the characters feel like actual people with flaws and positives and not just one-note tropes is exceptional. Personally only Zuberi and Celeia really do anything for me romantically (though I haven't entirely given up on Sam and Tulemeni yet), but everyone on the crew is someone that I'd like to get to know better as our adventure progresses. I will say though that I read in another comment that Obaa will not be romanceable. My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined. You made a better EDI and then immediately friendzoned me. Unbelievable :P
I also really like how you're handling the lore and the setting of the Void Dreamer and its mission, and I'm interested in seeing where the plot actually goes since presumably it's not just going to be space summer camp forever.
My only real concern here is that this VN is ambitious. Like real ambitious. This is already being somewhat managed at this stage with everything more or less going to the same place (e.g., no matter your background there's always something you have to choose to come clean about to the crew or lie about) but there are still a lot of variables to juggle as paths and routes presumably begin to branch out a bit more. I think you're already also getting a good start on managing this through the efforts at transparency, and I really hope you can keep that up because if you can this is going to be something really special :)