No no, you definitely made a better EDI. I always felt the original was missing something and she might just have needed Obaa's sprinkling of HK-47 energy to really push her over the edge. But I will continue to regret that she does not have a sexy robot body with which to pulverize Rael's pelvis.
I apologize if I had missed anything about the overall structure in the blog posts (of which there is delightfully a lot of text) and I also apologize for misspelling Caleia's name in the original comment. I doubt she'll sleep with Rael after that blunder so we're really striking out here.
Duly noted on the sales pitch - I'll check out the Patreon and maybe you'll see this username pop up there too :)