Yo! That was a pretty fun experience, let me summarize what I already told you on-stream:
The story is a pretty cool concept, that is a pretty good hook to keep the player interested in playing the game. And the artstyle look gorgeous, and fits very well the narrative you used here.
I was not fully convinced on the gameplay, since it's all or nothing: the game gives you little to no direction most of the time, and you have to randomly talk to everyone to guess what do you even need to do. OR you could ask the goddesses that will give you the solution right away. So there is not really a lot of gameplay involved. Though I really appreciated the possibility of choices that affect the story (which are not often just from a choice window), since help a lot to keep the player engaged.
While for the story - while I enjoyed it - I would say the characters dialogues were only informational, and they had no space to convey the character's personality. So they unfortunately looked quite plain most of the time.
At the end though it makes up for the it in the presentation and story concept, and it's overall good work for a single month!
Here's the VOD: