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THIS IS SO GOOOOOODDD!!!

The relationship between Lysandra and Ramon feels so natural and I looooove how it starts developing into romance!!

I also love Lysandra so much!! The way she's written feels so human; I really like how she can be a bit of an unreliable narrator at times when it comes to her brother, thinking that "he's just pretending to be nice" when in reality it doesn't feel like that at all.

Their parents though? Oh man, they suck!!

I really love how Ramon also makes Lysandra let her mask fall and she doesn't have to pretend with him, she can just be herself!!

I'm really invested in the story and really looking forward to Chapter 3!!

HusbandoGoddess281 days ago (1 edit) (+3)

AHHHHH!!! Thank you for playing the demo and for the kind words, Pri. 😭💕

Glad you're enjoying Ramon and MC's chemistry. When writing them, I really wanted to lean into the guiding aspect and show that BOTH can play that role. You'll see MC take more of that role in chapter 3 as Ramon begins to open up more with her because he feels safe around her (like she does with him) which terrifies him for reasons explained later.

Yes! Atlas is an interesting fellow that's misunderstood by his sister because of the one-sided animosity built up over the years. You'll get a peek into what his life is like in chapter 3. ;)

Super interested in hearing your thoughts on chapter 3 when it drops next month. Thanks again for playing! 💕

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