First, congrats on your first VN! You did a really good job with this! Your art is really cute, and I love the way that the backgrounds are stylized. Though your game is short, I got a really good grasp of Kate and Dinah as characters, as well as the world they inhabit. Speaking of those two, they're so cute together! I loved your writing. Oh, and the ending CG was really really lovely! I'm excited to see what you make next! ^^