Hello, It's a cute, lovely meditation. I enjoyed it! I noticed that part of the first scene wasn't quite translated properly and/or was still in English, but you can have the fullwidth poetic licence as it's your poem. It's cool to shift in tone and have different textures. ✨✨
Would love to know more about the Queer East Festival. I read from the online programme notes that some of the artists are from Hong Kong. Hope to keep in touch. 🙏