Thank you for your review! I appreciate the feedback, and it's really important to me. I might someday put more work into this, but at the same time, it is a demo/proof of concept for a larger game, so every bit of feedback I can gather is amazing. I'll keep all your comments in mind! Given the short amount of time, I wasn't able to come up with many characters, and I couldn't find a way to fit a real reward for growing things in plot wise this go around.
I'll definitely keep in mind the wordiness aspect. I'm kind of going for a farming sim/visual novel hybrid, so it kind of ends up being wordy as a result. I'll keep your comment in mind, though, and maybe cut back a little on the prose at least!
Once again, thank you so much for playing!