I really liked the dream sequences where things manifest in real time. It's a really cool affect. I wasn't the biggest fan of having to sneak past about 5 rooms of enemies that get progressively faster and more difficult to avoid. I feel like it could've gotten the point across with 3 rooms. It was a little frustrating and towards the end I chose to attack and I got locked into the (I forgot what it was called) over extension ending. It wasn't a very long game so it wasn't the most tedious game ever. But again those dream events where things manifest in real time was really really rad.
Edit: Also I think this is impressive given how little time you worked on it and how close you were to the deadline.