First, I want to say thank you to the author and I can see the hard work you have put in. I have been reading/editing SF for over 60 years.
However, I also want to say this is one of the most confusing games I have ever played. The back in forth to future, earth and within the game itself makes it very hard to understand. I understand the "dark scenes" are to give it drama, but at least on my computer many of the underground scenes are so dark can't see much of the action.
No, I wasn't expecting living with your Landlady/sisters etc. type of game. That is why I went into playing this. I know you have done if for love/enjoyment and I can appreciate that. I do think you have the makings of some good story elements here-- but so much confusion is thrown into the mix. I would have suggested sticking to two or three elements and running with that.
Actually, I have played through the choices, and some do matter. Saving the girl in the alley matters, helping certain people pick up the dialogue later.
I have played the latest release, and will continue to play, I can't just let a story go and wish you well and hope you continue to expand your universe.
I hope you don't mind this review-- again, some good positive elements-- still don't know what "updating memory" means. The list of girls still is not clearly understood and I am assuming the Codex will be fleshed out in future sessions. However, you might want to put some instructions/hints to start off with so people don't feel like they have missed something.
Good luck and thanks for the game.
regards