I enjoyed it way more than I was hopping for. If it's truly your first good job! I liked the idea and actually was hopping for more games of this "speedrun" genre to appear on this game jam.
On the other hand there is a lot of things to learn from:
- Mouse sensitivity is pain. Might work on your PC but slider for adjusting would be nice. Same thing applies for FOV.
- Audio is very bad and repetetive, probably the weakest side of your game.
- 3D is generaly not good for online web export. Not because of slow PCs but it just performs badly even on high-end PCs.
- Objective is to "go as fast as you can" and yet there is: no timer, no reset button, no leaderboard and otherwise no actuall reason to "go as fast as you can".
- Textures being applied wrongly. Textures that are streched are generaly not plesant to look at and I wouldn't recommend them.
- I am able to spam really fast the "tongue mechanic" and simply finish the game in less than 30 seconds. Maybe delay could fix that? (just an idea)
- Web page could use some love.
Otherwise I enjoyed the game :)