Really liked this one - it has an intriguing plot and a some great funny dialogue and interactions between the characters.
I think I got quite far - would loved to have got to the end but I'm not sure if I ran into a game breaking bug? The part specifically where Onyxia has her ceremony with the sleeping dude, the game just freezes although I can get into the menu, the scene doesn't play and I cannot move. Probably an autorun or parallel trigger is happening that should either be there or not but it feels like an easy enough fix.
Still, I really like what you made and think there is plenty enough content to give a rating here. Please let me know if I'm doing something wrong or if it is just the scene because I would like to try get to the end. Cheers.