I like the dissonant touch on the first track, it adds uneasiness. "Their Freedom" sounds cool with the fast drums, it's a bit loud at times though (the shattering glass sfx for example). The guitars could have been more sonically interesting, they feel too static.
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Hello! Thank you for listening and being honest, I appreciate that, it is really important for our growth!
The guitar part is spot on and I agree with it, I was running out of time and didn't want to ruin the song accidentally, haha.
As for the glass part, it was intentional. The song is about some pretty strong feelings, and those are never quiet or controlled.
It is an assumption, but it appears that we are basically the opposites when it comes to creating music and I find it fascinating! I am now eager to listen to your submission to see if that assumption holds true.
Thank you for your feedback. Take care!