The piano is too loud on "Onward", but I liked the bassline.
I like the sidechaining on the second track, it's overall very nicely done, love the melodies and the arpeggios, it's my fav track.
The mixing is still a bit rusty honestly, some instruments could be a bit quieter and panned around (delays can turn melodies into something from an another word). I like slight detail on the reverb that gets louder on the closer. Also nice thing to have a leitmotif, it's the first time I noticed one in this jam. The last two tracks drags on for a bit too long for me, but I don't think I'll have a problem hearing this on a video game.
Overall the ideas are great, I would have liked it more if the instrumentation were more varied and the mixing were better. Still, good job!