Love how dreamy this score is. The metalic sounds (gamalan?) fit nicely with the composition, and harmony complements the pallete well. I also feel the drums in "A Wall too Tall" add a sense of upbeatness that fits with your idea of hope, I think the harmony here does this well too.
For me, and I know we are not alloted so much time with the jam to explore everything we want to, I might suggest more musical elements (sfx like the keys/bells or dynamics) to bring the concept more - which I really like, the artwork too.
Congrats on your second composing jam :)!