I have played through the COMPLETE version! Congrats for finishing the game, and the new main menu looks amazing! I like the ending slides. I wish we have more time to spend with Mina and see her develop before Ehime takes over, or maybe see how she copes or deals with her Ehime persona, but it’s still a good enough time.
Thanks for completing the game! 😊 I am happy you like the new look of the main menu!! I actually was thinking about extending this story just a few days ago, but in another game, since I want to explore more of the MC’s relationship with Mina. This game for the jam addresses the question of “What makes a magical girl?” instead, and also the POV of an unwitting mahou shoujo support boyfriend. I tried to put in elements of what the typical shoujo manga boyfriend has to go through in the story, though I think the MC is probably not as accommodating or friendly as usual shoujo manga boyfriends. In the other story I will expand more on Mina dealing with her newfound identity, and the MC’s relationship with Mina. It might contain more mature elements and I might use a different style for that VN just to see how it will turn out.
Interesting idea. I suppose this being a jam game also limits your room to expand it, and getting it done is the utmost priority.
I would be willing to play more if you do another game. I like the MC, actually, the way he is trying to do his job proper and getting concerned when he is slowly swept away. At first I thought we would get to see other cases he is assigned to (maybe that is an element you could also revisit in the future). But hey, don’t let my ramblings get to you. There’s plenty enough contents in here for a month of jam, and I’m mostly running my mouth here.
Thanks for letting me know that you actually like the MC!! I was worried he was a bit too cold and his inner voice too critical. This is definitely something I've been trying to work on in my writing (most of it has been for dating sims), to develop relationships organically. I do love to hear your suggestions on what I could add to the story when I work on it again, and I think it is very helpful to know what you like and would like to see more off! I do find when I read other people's stories that action really adds excitement to the plot, so I will definitely add this element to any future story for this universe. Thank you once again for your feedback! 🫶🏻☺️🌷
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