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A jam submission

Eternal OrbsView game page

Eternal Orbs– Time loops. Memories fade. The truth waits.
Submitted by Plplayer — 2 hours, 34 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Special Theme#43.1253.125
Art#73.2503.250
Overall#152.7502.750
Trickery#182.3752.375
Fun#292.1252.125
Sound#351.7501.750

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

I like that you just drew your own art, always a charming way to go about making any style. Nice story, quite simple but it meets the themes. Having some sound would have been better, but overall nice job!

Developer

Thanks for playing! Ya, I wanted add a lot more features including sound, but as I've mentioned, I didn't get the time. I'll add everything after the jam

Submitted

Nice entry! The art was definitely a huge highlight for me. The style worked very well, and really contributed to the atmosphere of the game in so many ways, supporting the mood of the story. I also think that you did a good job telling a story with this game, but the dialogue did get a bit boring at times. I think two main components could really take this game to the next level - sound and special effects. I am a huge advocate for music/sound effects, as I think it makes games so much more immersive and interesting for the player. You can also use music and sound effects to set a tone, similar to how you did with the art. Additionally, special effects can be used to improve a game's general feel and reception toward the player - these could be anything from footsteps while walking, talking animations, or even just a small dialogue text fade in. Overall - fantastic job! I enjoyed playing :D

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree with everything you've mentioned and I really wanted to add all o f it, and some AI voice over as well for the dialogues to not get boring, but 4 days just weren't enough for all of that. I also wanted to add the talking animations, but it was my first time using krita so even making like the walking animation took me a ton of time (the transformation mask was really frustrating to use at first). And I couldn't really make the animation for 1 of the characters since that would've been weird. I'll definitely add everything after the jam tho. Also, really loved your game, nice humor, very chaotic and fun lol. 

Submitted(+1)

great art and story. Could you rate mine pls?

Developer (1 edit)

Will do,when I get the time. Thank you for playing!

Submitted(+1)

Simple but good art and good story, can you rate my game pls?

Developer(+1)

I will as soon as I get the time! Thank you for playing!

(+1)

Great game! Great story, really enjoyed it

Developer(+1)

Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Nice writing and artstyle. A good start. Needs more gameplay elements though. Right now there's not much to do other than collect these orbs. 

Developer

Thanks! Guess I focussed a bit too much on the story and forgot that games actually need to be fun 😅. Definitely will focus on the gameplay next time. Will try out your game

Submitted(+1)

its a very simplistic game, would love for you to try my game

Developer

will do, thank you for the feedback 

Submitted(+1)

It's a simple text-based game with a lot of dialogue. Can you rate my game?

Developer

Yes, will do