Nice entry! The art was definitely a huge highlight for me. The style worked very well, and really contributed to the atmosphere of the game in so many ways, supporting the mood of the story. I also think that you did a good job telling a story with this game, but the dialogue did get a bit boring at times. I think two main components could really take this game to the next level - sound and special effects. I am a huge advocate for music/sound effects, as I think it makes games so much more immersive and interesting for the player. You can also use music and sound effects to set a tone, similar to how you did with the art. Additionally, special effects can be used to improve a game's general feel and reception toward the player - these could be anything from footsteps while walking, talking animations, or even just a small dialogue text fade in. Overall - fantastic job! I enjoyed playing :D
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Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree with everything you've mentioned and I really wanted to add all o f it, and some AI voice over as well for the dialogues to not get boring, but 4 days just weren't enough for all of that. I also wanted to add the talking animations, but it was my first time using krita so even making like the walking animation took me a ton of time (the transformation mask was really frustrating to use at first). And I couldn't really make the animation for 1 of the characters since that would've been weird. I'll definitely add everything after the jam tho. Also, really loved your game, nice humor, very chaotic and fun lol.