Always awesome to see visual novels in jams! this one was pretty cute, hit the right beats for me, obviously pretty short but thats jam times in a nutshell, especially with how much art is required for this kind of VN. Bonus points for not doing the "you play as a bunny" which I know I did hehe.
I am not a writer so I dont have much feedback on how its written or anything, and renypy is a great program with alot of the nice VN polish, being able to skip through dialogue youve seen before and all that.
Great stuff!