Well I’m not surprised about Russel in the fave charts being either ‘bad’ or ‘passable’, from what I’ve seen he’s just bland. Liam being a spectrum is interesting. But I saw in one of your answers about the choices you said something along the lines of “Well if you do Liam’s first then Ryan’s makes more sense”, which just seems rather baffling. You think your readers would meet Liam, the character introduced as an unlikable asshole, and decide to do his route first or at least before Ryan’s? I’m not the biggest fan of Ryan’s I find him rather bland personally. But you’ve sorta introduced him as like the ‘main’ love interest since he’s CLEARLY into Joel. Why would anyone pick Liam above Ryan in terms of who to read first based on introductions?
Ryan gives me Torahiko vibes, in that they’re clearly into the MC but are going to do something that’s going to make me want to hit them in the nuts.
You said the slime monster is a hive mind so being friendly and aggressive makes sense. So what type of hive mind to act so bi-polar? Geth style where every ‘drone’ has a voice or a gestalt consciousness?
The name on the phone you said is a password reference, but password’s actually has a use. Does MC’s?