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Tales Of Wocdes259 days ago (2 edits) (+2)

Thank you for taking the time to do this :D Feedback is always welcome!

Firstly, people just scrolling by: Do not click "View rest" on the above post unless you want a lot of screenshots of text from a bonus story :D

Secondly, I have fixed most of these, though I have not updated the demo. The pdf version of the story in kofi still has all the typos, I might fix that later.

Edit: I updated the demo :D

Though I have to say, the "..." thing is probably in there a thousand+ times, so I am not fixing all of that right now for part 1 and the main demo :D And I can see part 2 still has lots of those too.

The "...", I try to use it to mark hesitation/thinking but I think I do it too much. It's really a problem, I do it in my emails irl now too.

Thirdly, there is an email in the game description that you can use for things like this, if that is preferable.

Fourthly, the blog does contain a lot of snippets etc. based on asks. Other stuff too, but those tend to dominate. There is also just one big file where I dump the asks and the snippets (all of them), available through kofi for supporters. Though, I have to say that it is a nightmare of chaos, typos and grammar. I might sometimes fix minor things in the blog, but I usually just leave whatever the "first draft" was in the pdf file.

Thanks again, and have a good day!

TheMadMagician259 days ago(+1)

Indeed, I should have warned about the many screenshots.

The "..." weren't too much for me, I understand what you mean, but as long as you limit it to thoughts and dialogs, it is fine.

And yeah, I did read some of the asks, some even were questions I had too, sometimes the answer itself made me think new questions. For example (do not read if you care for possible spoiler): the one where you answer if the hands will be completely cured, this one made me theorize that if the mc has a heritage with long lived species, like dragons or elves, that they could probably life longer too, then after some centuries, like 300 years (maybe even less than a century if they treat their hands daily? Which would not be in the IF) that the hands could be fully healed. But that are just theories I like to think about. I tend to be very passionate with things I like, thinking many possible theories.

I had more, maybe if I make an account for tumblr one day, I will send some asks.

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