Hi! I tried to play your game during the jam, but failed because of the previously mentioned text-background contrast. Therefore didn't rate it, cause I couldn't form my opinion :)
I tried it one more time now and think that the idea is pretty creative!
The only thing is that I didn't get fully immersed at the beginning; maybe some additional decisions or small puzzles right in the first part of the game would help :) Just to make the player a part of the story as soon as possible.
And I loved the memory restoration process: it would be so cool to get more of it! Right now it seems that you are about to get invested into the game, but then it ends ;) So for such a short game (which seems totally fine to be that short) some extra interaction would work nicely imo.