- The music is cute and fits well.
- The art was really nice.
- The cooking game was fun.
- The diary feature & mini games were a great addition and made the game feel more interactive.
- The overall vibe was cozy and inviting.
Suggestions:
- In the cooking mini-game, I would have preferred the items to glow or have an outline when hovered instead of the box that appears over them. Something like how the diary glows on the desk (but without the square) would feel more natural.
- The yellow pages of the diary are really bright and hurt my eyes a bit. Toning it down or using a different shade would help while keeping the design intact.
- It would be nice to go back a page in the diary instead of only moving forward.
- Seeing the photos from the photo mini-game appear in the diary would be a great touch.
- I’d suggest narrowing down the fonts. Having something unique for the diary and its cover makes sense, but using one consistent font for things like "The Next Day" and dialogue would make it feel more cohesive.
- A general suggestion I give to most games: adding audio options so players can adjust volume would be really helpful.
Overall, it's clear a lot of work went into this in the short amount of time, good job!