fantastic art, really pretty, zach's design is so unique and different in comparison to other VNs ive played in the past. loved his personality, his nuances throughout the game, choice of VA was perfect for his character, amazing job for a first game!
what fell short for me was that even though the MC & ML are exes, i can tell that they've shared a lot of memories & "missions" together and its been mentioned throughout, but there's a lot of telling, not showing. because the player is being told these things but not shown, sometimes i felt "left out" as there were things said without much context, like i was in the middle of someone else's save. i played the DLC afterwards and didn't feel like much was expanded :(
overall, for a free game and for your very first game, i thought this was great! although there can be some improvements, im not a game dev or anything, i just like gaming & writing in general. i can't wait for your future projects!