Oh and what about that title? Doesn't seem to have to do much with the story, or did I miss anything? But how could you say no to a pun.
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Thanks! I agree, variety would be a good idea. Music was in the plan, but we weren't able to get to it during the jam. Maybe next time! Oh and the title (and most of the story) definitely relies on puns. I thought the idea of a Murder of Crows riding public transit would be funny and the rest of the title wrote itself. Thanks for playing and for the feedback!