I genuinely expected you to be the kidnapper, not the victim. oO
Not that it matters, but you may want to make that clearer.
People like to have their expectations met.
Cute artwork. Would make a good children's book.
Shitty, shitty as a game, since there is no choices, and this is therefore not a game at all.
....but in retrospect I suppose the word 'kinetic' may mean something like 'without choices'.
I am pretty fluent in english, but some words seem to trip me up still. *sigh*
I'd still like this better if it was on kindle, and not disguised as a game.