This was a fun read-through! I always love hearing what were the inspirations behind the things others create, how the project came along and even some of the hijinks involved with it. The part about how you inform people of what you want was so funny and relatable. 'also PLONK' had me laughing more than you can probably believe. And it's nice to hear you all seemed to have fun working together on this too :)
I also liked to hear your thoughts about the 'endings'. Because that was definitely the feeling I was getting. Should I mention that I felt kind of bad that the end where they loose their innocence sooner felt more like what would really happen, even though I would have wished for the 'innocence' ending to be true as well? What's wrong with me? Do I just like to see people suffer and be sad, because it makes them grow and tends to tell you a lot about them? (don't answer that by the way)
Also, I didn't expect this to be a 'preview' to Last Winter Knight when you first announced it, to be honest. But it was definitely a pleasant suprise and I'm looking forward to your next project (whether it's LWK or something else) all the more now.
Thank you!