Interesting way to do your progression. Slightly clunky but the story and art made up for it.
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Don't notice much of a difference. Still a cool idea but the dots that you are supposed to go over are really difficult to see in most of the images. I spend most of the time just moving my mouse around trying to find them and then getting sent back to the last one.
I also noticed that there might be a bug that allows you to finish the same one 2 times before going forward.