I got all the way to the good ending and I think this is a pretty good VN for a jam. I did encounter a bug where after doing the ERB event her sprite just stayed on screen for the rest of the game, but nothing game breaking.
I think this might have benefited a lot from being in an engine like Ren'Py instead since a lot of my criticisms for the game are UI/UX things that Ren'Py handles natively (logs, pausing, etc.) Also the fade to black transition took a bit long for my taste. I would've liked a feature where if I press space again I can skip it, but otherwise, this is good.
I like the chibi art and the story is written pretty well!