Thank you so much for leaving a review! I know it was generic, but it was mostly intended as a practice game to test my Ren'py skills, so I didn't focus on the plot as much as I will in my future games. Also, the bonus story was just intended to explain Clarissa's backstory, not make her sympathetic; sorry if it came across that way. But, glad you enjoyed it! (As a side note, I am also trying to practice my art skills so that I will be able to draw some art for my future games.)
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'know it was generic, but it was mostly intended as a practice game to test my Ren'py skills, so I didn't focus on the plot as much as I will in my future games'
Ah, that's very fair then. The game was pretty solid in technical terms so other than flashy effects and things like that your general skill with engine seems pretty good.
'Also, the bonus story was just intended to explain Clarissa's backstory, not make her sympathetic; sorry if it came across that way.'
That's surprising since it seemed like it was giving her a motive and fair backstory. No need to apologize for it coming across wrong.
'As a side note, I am also trying to practice my art skills so that I will be able to draw some art for my future games.'
Awesome and great to hear you're planning on making future games : )