The visuals are very cute and charming, with a storybook kind of feel to them. And I really like the use of lighting to give it that somber mood...
Writing wise, there are a few typos and the pacing of conversation is not always top notch. There's a lot of information thrown at you from the beginning. Also, navigation is not exactly intuitive either. I think a few in-game tutorials for controls would have gone a long way.
I'm really delighted to receive your feedback and I truly appreciate your valuable suggestions! I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused by the language, as I am not a native speaker and there may inevitably be some awkwardness in the translation. Your comments are very insightful, and my team and I have made adjustments to the storyline and character portrayals based on your advice. We've also carefully reviewed the language issues. We cordially invite you to experience it again and look forward to hearing your new thoughts!
