Spooktober 6th Annual Visual Novel Jam

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A jam submission

See you again 3.0View game page

Warm,Healing, A stories about love

Submitted by JamesKirk — 1 hour, 42 minutes before the deadline

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Results

Criteria	Rank	Score*	Raw Score
Visuals	#241	1.633	4.000
Music	#244	1.225	3.000
Overall	#250	1.123	2.750
Story	#251	1.225	3.000
Voice Acting	#255	0.408	1.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Content Warnings
General audiences,No Archive Warnings Apply

Log Line
The story of a ghost returning home and reuniting with family and friends.

Team Credits & Cast
Game Art Designer, Gameplay Programming,Gameplay Programming

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J.P.D.E StudiosSubmitted25 days ago(+1)

The visuals are very cute and charming, with a storybook kind of feel to them. And I really like the use of lighting to give it that somber mood...

Writing wise, there are a few typos and the pacing of conversation is not always top notch. There's a lot of information thrown at you from the beginning. Also, navigation is not exactly intuitive either. I think a few in-game tutorials for controls would have gone a long way.

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BABELOMANIA

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JamesKirkDeveloper4 days ago(+1)

I'm really delighted to receive your feedback and I truly appreciate your valuable suggestions! I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused by the language, as I am not a native speaker and there may inevitably be some awkwardness in the translation. Your comments are very insightful, and my team and I have made adjustments to the storyline and character portrayals based on your advice. We've also carefully reviewed the language issues. We cordially invite you to experience it again and look forward to hearing your new thoughts!